Opinion on lyrics

[keesvanderlaak]

Hi all,

I wrote some lyrics for a new song lately, I need your opinion on em.

Please let me know what you think. and maybe help me out on a titel to it.




Doubt-filled clouds have shaded my soul
Days passing waiting for it to pour down
I'm driftin' searching this town of sorrow
Knowing there is going to be a sadder tomorrow

this love that I never meant to last
should’ve been over but its too far passed..
don’t you know we were supposed to fail
love without hope but it hasn’t yet de-railed

your body remains my surrogate
for all denied pleasure's spent
leaving what remains hollow inside
if only my soul didn’t have to hide

this love that I never meant to last
should’ve been over but its too far passed..
don’t you know we were supposed to fail
love without hope but it hasn’t yet de-railed

If you tell me to go I will,
if you tell me what’s wrong I’ll heal
if you want a new start just say
and I’ll be again running away

Guitar Solo

the sour taste of our sweet love
brings me closer to the edge again
but just in time you take an critical action
over and over again, liquid satisfaction.....

this love that I never meant to last
should’ve been over but its too far passed..
don’t you know we were supposed to fail
love without hope but it hasn’t yet de-railed

[keesvanderlaak]

just got the titel from a fellow rapnat member.

Sorrow Tomorrow